Celeste Azuline

[nicotlt]

Celeste Azuline

Generalities

Name: Celeste azuline
AKA: Blue Parade
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Faction: N/A
Squad: N/A
Role: N/A
Battle Theme: youtu.be/qnOMDlEIzKI

Rank: D
Red Orbs: 200/1000
Blue Orbs: 0/400

Character Description

Physical Appearance(s): Celeste is a young-looking lady with a small build, she is considered to be very thin and petite, which does not match her actual physical strenght. She has blue hair and eyes with matching colours. She usually wears grey and black clothing so her hair and eyes can stand out, her outfit style is very varied, but she likes to wear really out of the loop clothing, going from Idol-like wear to maid outfits.
Personality: Celeste is a very kind and friendly person, people could even describe her as being loud. She enjoys dancing and singing, specially if someone else is there to listen. She is very extroverted and likes to have company during Missions.

Backstory

Celeste was born in the UK as the daughter of a retired Devil Hunter, ever since little she trained with her father, who wanted her to be a successful Hunter like he once was. Celeste always loved her family and is considered a "golden girl" by her parents, because she never got into fights and liked to help others. After she finished her training at 17 years old, her father started to take her to Hunting Jobs so she could get some experience in the workfield of Devil Hunting. She quickly got the hang of it and as soon as she turned 21, she opened up her own Devil Hunting business in London called "Stargazer".

Traits

Trait #1 Inhuman Strength
Through thorough training, natural disposition or some magical modification to your muscle structure, you are capable of imparting a lot more force onto objects in the world. You are capable of performing feats of strength that go well beyond what your peers can do, lifting heavier weights and throwing objects with a great deal more force.

Trait #2 Inhuman Toughness
You can push through pain and take a sound beating without it wearing you down. This may be because your body is very hard to damage, or maybe because your pain perception is reduced. Whatever the case may be, you can endure a bigger punishment than your peers and push through the pain, making you much tougher to beat.

Equipment

Name: Valkyrie
Description: A crafted arm in the form of a medium-sized double-bladed axe. It has an anomalously sharp blade, result of a magical modification to it's edge that automatically sharpens it's edge to near perfection any time the edge deteriorates or gets undone by friction. The crystal shard that resides between both blades is responsible for maintaining the sharpening magic. even though the axe is made out of pure gold, it's resistance is way superior than actual gold, that is because it has been reinforced with magical means during the crafting of the piece.
Upgrades: Resilient(trait-like)
The material this Arm is made of is extremely tough, or it has been made tough through magical or technological means. This allows the Arm to resist damage much more than any regular object of the same type.

Razor Sharp(trait-like)
The edge of this arm's blade is incredibly sharp, being able to cut through bones like butter and tear more resilient materials with but a few swings.

Name: Wolfgang
Description: A crafted arm in the form of a handgun similar to a Sig Sauer P320, it presents a brown-ish color and a compact design made for ease of carry. It is not in any way suppressed, as it is used in direct combat against demons.
Upgrade Points: 1
Upgrades: Infinite Ammo
The Arm can fire at will without being reloaded. This is the result of Conjuration magic simply summoning a new bullet into the chamber, or in some cases Elemental Mastery producing the required ammo when it isn't too complex. This is especially dangerous for some weapon types, and may not always be applicable.

Combat Foci

Name: Star Purge
Description: A Focus made for heavy bladed weapons(specially axes) in combination with a handgun, for that reason the meelee weapon needs to be one-handed. It consists on single heavy strikes and applying pressure on the opponent with the help of the handgun to maintain pressure in case they try and get away from the meelee weapon's range. The attacks don't usually have any sneaky tactics or surprise elements, only pure brute force and piercing moves. It takes a head-on approach instead of trying to attack from behind or similar strategies.
Rank: D
Aspects: N/A

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Hey nicotlt, thanks for applying. Let's review this girl!

I don't see any issue on the technical side of things. You've clearly understood all the rules perfectly.

I have only a slight issue with your two Crafted Arms, in that their description is really really short. While Wolfgang makes reference to an existing design, which helps, Valkyrie leaves a lot unsaid. I assume your profile picture is where you took inspiration for the character: I can see that the inspiration for Valkyrie is a double-bladed battle axe, for example, and also that it has some blue gems here and there. So it's much more unique than just a golden axe; also, real-life gold is very brittle and makes for a terrible weapon but this one is even sharper than normal - why is that? That could be a good jumping point to describe the weapon more uniquely.
For Wolfgang you could for example describe its colour pattern as I can see many different colorations of the same gun online.
There isn't a minimum number of words to hit per description, but I feel like more could be done to let the next person that will read this sheet - a player - understand what their mental image of those weapons should be.

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[p align="center"][font size="4"][b]Celeste Azuline[/b][/font][/p]
[p align="center"][font size="3"][i]Generalities[/i][/font][/p]
[b]Name:[/b] Celeste Azuline
[b]AKA:[/b] Blue Parade
[b]Age:[/b] 21
[b]Gender:[/b] Female
[b]Race:[/b] Human
[b]Faction:[/b] N/A
[b]Squad:[/b] N/A
[b]Role:[/b] N/A
[b]Battle Theme:[/b] https://youtu.be/qnOMDlEIzKI

[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Red Orbs:[/b] 200/1000 :ro:
[b]Blue Orbs:[/b] 0/400 :bo:

[p align="center"][font size="3"][i]Character Description[/i][/font][/p]
[b]Physical Appearance(s):[/b] Celeste is a young-looking lady with a small build, she is considered to be very thin and petite, which does not match her actual physical strenght. She has blue hair and eyes with matching colours. She usually wears grey and black clothing so her hair and eyes can stand out, her outfit style is very varied, but she likes to wear really out of the loop clothing, going from Idol-like wear to maid outfits.
[b]Personality:[/b] Celeste is a very kind and friendly person, people could even describe her as being loud. She enjoys dancing and singing, specially if someone else is there to listen. She is very extroverted and likes to have company during Missions.

[p align="center"][font size="3"][i]Backstory[/i][/font][/p]
Celeste was born in the UK as the daughter of a retired Devil Hunter, ever since little she trained with her father, who wanted her to be a successful Hunter like he once was. Celeste always loved her family and is considered a "golden girl" by her parents, because she never got into fights and liked to help others. After she finished her training at 17 years old, her father started to take her to Hunting Jobs so she could get some experience in the workfield of Devil Hunting. She quickly got the hang of it and as soon as she turned 21, she opened up her own Devil Hunting business in London called "Stargazer".

[p align="center"][font size="3"][i]Traits[/i][/font][/p]

[i]Trait #1 Inhuman Strength[/i]
Through thorough training, natural disposition or some magical modification to your muscle structure, you are capable of imparting a lot more force onto objects in the world. You are capable of performing feats of strength that go well beyond what your peers can do, lifting heavier weights and throwing objects with a great deal more force.

[i]Trait #2 Inhuman Toughness[/i]
You can push through pain and take a sound beating without it wearing you down. This may be because your body is very hard to damage, or maybe because your pain perception is reduced. Whatever the case may be, you can endure a bigger punishment than your peers and push through the pain, making you much tougher to beat.

[p align="center"][font size="3"][i]Equipment[/i][/font][/p]

[b]Name:[/b] Valkyrie
[b]Description:[/b] A crafted arm in the form of a medium-sized double-bladed axe. It has an anomalously sharp blade, result of a magical modification to it's edge that automatically sharpens it's edge to near perfection any time the edge deteriorates or gets undone by friction. The crystal shard that resides between both blades is responsible for maintaining the sharpening magic. even though the axe is made out of pure gold, it's resistance is way superior than actual gold, that is because it has been reinforced with magical means during the crafting of the piece.
[b]Upgrades:[/b] Resilient(trait-like)
The material this Arm is made of is extremely tough, or it has been made tough through magical or technological means. This allows the Arm to resist damage much more than any regular object of the same type.

Razor Sharp(trait-like)
The edge of this arm's blade is incredibly sharp, being able to cut through bones like butter and tear more resilient materials with but a few swings.

[b]Name:[/b] Wolfgang
[b]Description:[/b] A crafted arm in the form of a handgun similar to a Sig Sauer P320, it presents a brown-ish color and a compact design made for ease of carry. It is not in any way suppressed, as it is used in direct combat against demons.
[b]Upgrade Points:[/b] 1
[b]Upgrades:[/b] Infinite Ammo
The Arm can fire at will without being reloaded. This is the result of Conjuration magic simply summoning a new bullet into the chamber, or in some cases Elemental Mastery producing the required ammo when it isn't too complex. This is especially dangerous for some weapon types, and may not always be applicable.

[p align="center"][font size="3"][i]Combat Foci[/i][/font][/p]

[b]Name:[/b] Star Purge
[b]Description:[/b] A Focus made for heavy bladed weapons(specially axes) in combination with a handgun, for that reason the meelee weapon needs to be one-handed. It consists on single heavy strikes and applying pressure on the opponent with the help of the handgun to maintain pressure in case they try and get away from the meelee weapon's range. The attacks don't usually have any sneaky tactics or surprise elements, only pure brute force and piercing moves. It takes a head-on approach instead of trying to attack from behind or similar strategies.
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Aspects:[/b] N/A


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(Trait Rank D) Inhuman Strength [Spent 0 :RO:, Spent 0 :BO:] [Gained 0 :BO:]

(Trait Rank D) Inhuman Toughness [Spent 0 :RO:, Spent 0 :BO:] [Gained 0 :BO:]

(Crafted Arm 2 UP) Valkyrie [Spent 800 :RO:, Spent 0 :BO:] [Gained 400 :BO:]

(Crafted Arm 1 UP) Wolfgang [Spent 0 :RO:, Spent 400 :BO:] [Gained 0 :BO:]

(Combat Focus Rank D) Star Purge [Spent 0 :RO:, Spent 0 :BO:] [Gained 0 :BO:]



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